Kindness poem

WALT: use new words to soot my acrostic poem.

I was able to use words that I have never used in my writing before eg. Sensitive,experience,positive and Increase.

Next time I will use a thesauruses to replace words that I have used and turn it into a new word.

Recount writing

Walt: Write a clear sequence of events by using appropriate time connective words in my recount

I was able to write a Rad Recount by writing the recount in order and write the recount with the Idea's in my brain storm.

Next time I will put more year 6 word's to hook the reader.

John Pule Art