Camp Merc Acrostic poem
Canoe's as long as the bunk beds.
Abseiling looking at the water as blue as the sky.
Mrs Houghton making excellent great food.
People using great team work in there skits.
Mum's and Dad's helping with our ativitys
Everyone having more fun then ever.
Running up and down up and down the huge beach.
Caribbean as safe as a metal house.
2 bad night of sleep.
0 un happy people.
1 super super great activity/surfing.
7- 1 = 6 team groups.
by Everest-2017 Rm 19
Learning Refection:
Walt: edit and revise my writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback.
Learning Refection:
I was able to change some spelling mistake because Sukie told me to.
Next time I´m going to try to edit my work on my own and look for spelling mistakes, punctuation and I will use a thesaurus. I will also sit beside someone that I can ask for them to read my writing and give me some feedback.
